◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- my cousin sister
-> my cousin
- people's income and the economy was in a boom
-> so people's incomes increased and the economy boomed
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
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