You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as
- you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points;
- your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or
- grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.
이거 오프인가요?ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ첫시험이라 잘몰라서....